She looks into air, herself falling rain
Dripping coldness past, memories old pain
abiding all the laws,making thee happy
no love no lust
sadness holds inside........making no space for joy
deeply wounded...scars visible
and yet.....dere is a big smile on my face...
giving me the hope
the strength
inspiration
to be what i am
to hold on
with all the pain
and fly....to the almighty....and thank him........for showing me the truth of life......how unruthy
the world can be......when things are not yours
all of topsy turvy
but still life.......
i cant say its nice,[its horrible 4 that lady]
ReplyDeleteplz don imagine these sorta things, i don wanna anybody to be in these situations.
its imagination dude..........ppl r aactually going thru such situtaions.ive juz put light onto d fact
ReplyDeleteReality is nice place 2 visit but i sure would not want such ppl 2 live there
ReplyDeletewateva u say dis is the truth man...
ReplyDeletei am the prime minister of india.
ReplyDeletei know this' truth, but every truth shouldnt be expressed. actually the reality is canged by not accepting it a few times
u cant acept it just for a while..and u also said dat.......some day in life u have to accept the truth..........and ya ur screen name as prime minister dooes not make u the prime minister u ass....!
ReplyDeleteNice 1 sis..!!!!! u actually rite vry well!!!!!
ReplyDeletethnx so much
ReplyDeleteyes, itz very true.
ReplyDeleteTo all those who don't believe this....
Just get out of ur computer screens....walk down the road wher thousands of ppl live.... Feel their pain....and then believe it
i agree with you talke people just get endowned by all the luxuries of life...and dont see others misery and ridicule them thet should really see reality man.....
ReplyDeleteI am sorry to say, but the intent of this poem is not clear at all. Is this poem in 1st person, 2nd person or 3rd person? Is this person happy or sad? Positive or negative? How about the inspiration from Shakespeare (thee?)?
ReplyDeleteBeing a critic here - hope I dont offend...
Its more like an overview of the 1st persons pain by a keen observer....i love shakespeare's work but thought of adding a glimpse of open reality
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