long ago
millions of years ago,
i fell in love with you,
a new breu,
those years wew all of blossom
upon the great flossom
its been 20 years now
but even today...
As I look upon your lips of red
I feel so blessed to know their touch
And as we make our lover’s bed
I sense that this may be too much...
i am intoxicated by your charm,
the feeling of your arms
as u fix the new light
and give a new sight
i love you even more
the cajolemnt has no bounds
and surrounds me all around.............
wow the poem is fantastic.....
ReplyDeletebut plz mention the idea behind the poem.like most of the topics are behind love, human relationship but ur frnds hardly know ki tum kya sooch kar yeh sab likthi hooo.
lik other day u said me that u hav written a poem for ur frnd who got hurt in love.
mention feelings behind it
tabhi logo ko padne me maza ayega.
dis is a poem keeping in mind the love between a couple who has been married for years...........but everyday seems new for them
ReplyDeletena teri shadi hui hain na tu kise ke sath relationship main hain....tho terko yeah sab kaisa patha.....
ReplyDeletesaach batao
akash i knw quite alot of stuff........im nt a kid
ReplyDeletesags---here cajolement means a new refreshing feeling of happines,love and enticemnt..
ReplyDeletevery beautiful.
ReplyDeletewell expressed...
thank you..........
ReplyDeleteits been 20 years now? i thot u r 17 now ryt? :)
ReplyDeleteyaim 17...dis is just imagination...........as i said to at,its about a couple who has beenmarried fr 20 years.its nt abt me...........me and luv....?lol
ReplyDeletegod knows y all ppl think dat all d love poems and articles are related to me..............?:L
ReplyDeleteLovely words.. quiet touchin.. yr boyfriend must be real lucky to have such a Romantic girlfriend..
ReplyDeletei liked the end...
i love you even more
the cajolemnt has no bounds
and surrounds me all around.............
thnax a lot............and i dnt have a bf..........nt intrested.....
ReplyDeletegood one too
ReplyDeletethank u
ReplyDeletelong ago
ReplyDeletemillions of years ago,
i fell in love with your poems,
a new breu,
those years wew all of blossom
upon the great flossom
its been 17 years now
but even today...
As I look upon your poems of felt
I feel so blessed to know their touch
And as i make my poet's mind
I sense that this may be too much...
i am intoxicated by the wordly charm,
the feeling of your feelings
as u think the new poem
and give me a new sight
i love you even more
the cajolemnt has no bounds
and surrounds me all around.............
haha.......thnk u........!
ReplyDeleteNice 1...i like it!!!!!!!!
ReplyDelete