
i walk down the lonely lane,
with all the pain,
my heart cries....come back my love
the light fades away,
and darknes opens its doors,
the sun lies low,
the stars appear in a row,
the mysty breeze all around ,
and the gushy noises sound,
the silence makes we wonder,
i ponder,are you there?
i sit near the sea
hoping to catch a glimpse of the ship
but my thoughts go for a dip
time flows by
but you do not come
its your conviction
but my prediction
that some day we will meet
dancing in the moonlight
it would be a boon..........
i hope........my love........
but i have to cope
with all the pain
sometimes but all in vain.................
wow ya..its truly so beautiful..its really gud 2 write sumthn like dat..its shwin ur inner feelings....kewl i liked it
ReplyDeletethnx sweetie..<3
ReplyDeletelovely!!!!!!!!sweetie dis is dam gud!!!
ReplyDeletethnk u sweetie....<3
ReplyDeleteIf this poem is for ur friend then may god bless her with lots of power,
ReplyDeleteand helps her to find someone who loves her.
and then your good friend will understand whatever happens it happens for good.
just let her know that it really takes tim to happen something good.
akash..........ids is just a general poem i wrote keeping in mind sm1 who has been waiting for her love...........my ideas dnt limit to any1
ReplyDeleteVery cool..good work :)
ReplyDeletethank sags.........
ReplyDeletegood imagination.....
ReplyDeleteu must write a book
trust me it will work.
koi karida ya na karide
meri ek copy tho paki hain
akash i wanted to actually tell you i am writing a book....im in the scripting process......
ReplyDeleteand ill be glad to gift u d frst copy......!
ReplyDeletebt fr dat cm to mumabi u dude!
ReplyDeletehey i reilli like it ... damn gud poem ya .. i actully got senti ... :) .. n ya i guess u shud sell thm .. ul get loads of money .. lol
ReplyDeletethnk neha.............
ReplyDeletedis ones awesome..awesome lines in it to die for :)
ReplyDeletethnx lini.luv
ReplyDeletethts really good i really lik it ............. well done gal.............................
ReplyDeletethnx milo
ReplyDeletewell done
ReplyDeletethnx
ReplyDeletenice 1 sexy 3......i like it!!!!!!!!
ReplyDeletelol..thnx a ton
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